Magazine Advert Draft Feedback

I asked a few peers for feedback on my draft of my magazine advert and this is what they said:

Alex: I think that it needs some information on what is in the digipack, also add some fine print to make it look real, other than that it is a good clean and simple design that works well.

Tara: It has a nice clean design that is simple and eye catching, I would like some more information on what is in the package, I can't really see it clearly on the picture of the digipack, other than that it is good.

Tim: Nice simple design, but does need information on what I will be getting when I buy it.