Magazine Advert Feedback

Again I have asked for some feedback from the same peers as before, to see if they like the updates that I have made.

Alex : Much better, now that I know what I am going to get I am more likely to buy it. Although I would still like to know where I would go to buy it, instead of it just telling me that it is released and not telling me where I can get it.

Tara : Good now that there is a contents list and that the text its placed better on the page, it works well with each of the elements on the page. But I would maybe suggest moving the image of the digipack and the Contents list around, so that you get the digipack image first, after the text.

Tim : Better than the last version, now it has all the information that I would look for on a magazine advert.